Wednesday 4 December 2013

Script Draft 5 - Minor Changes

                EPISODE 1


FADE IN:

SCREEN TITLES: “LIABILITIES”


EXT. HILL IN THE WILDERNERSS – NIGHT

The deserted city in the background, barren landscape showing no-one in sight other than the 3 main characters.
SCOTT (a tall thin boy in his late teens clearly shown by his jumper) is gazing into the distance.  LIAM (overweight, short boy in his mid-teens) and JOSH (a slim individual with large fringe) are stood on a hill overlooking an empty city where no-one is in sight, cars have crashed and there is a big crater in the centre.


                     Scott:
(Gazing into the distance)
Where is everyone?
Like no-one’s there and cars
are overturned and stuff


Liam walks over

Liam:
What are you suggesting Scott?

Josh a slim individual with large fringe buts in

Josh:
He’s obviously suggesting that
everyone has given up with this
dead-end city and decided to
leg it to the nearest city
where dreams can still be made.

Scott:
(Sighs)
No Josh. What I meant to say
is it looks like something has
hit the city and everyone has
fled or worse..

Liam:
What do you mean worse?

Scott:
Like y’know dead and stuff

Josh:
(disbelief)
Just listen to yourselves;
they’re probably fitting new
roads or something you retards


Scott:
That deep? They’re not making
a highway to hell you utter moron.


Liam laughs

Josh:
Okay smartass, so what’s happened?

Liam:
Just stop fighting. We need to go
down there and
(stuttering) investigate

Josh:
Investigate?

Liam:
yeah.

Josh:
So? What are we waiting
here for? C’mon.

Grabs Liam by the arm as they walk towards the empty city

`                                    Dissolve to:



EXT. URBAN CITY – NIGHT

On the outskirts of an urbanised city where cars have been overturned and car alarms are going off. The air is heavy with mist

Scott:
Well, this doesn’t look
very ‘fun’

Josh:
C’mon lets get closer

Scott:
(dramatically)
And here he goes again,
always taking command to
drag us to an early death

Josh:
Wow. You realllllyyyyyyyy
are a pussy. Liam you comin’?
Liam:
Comin’? What? Sorry I wasn’t
listening

Josh:
(Aggressively)
Well I’m going with or without
you.

Liam:
(Stuttering)
but, but, but it looks dangerous
like we could get hurt or somethin’

Scott:
(aimed to annoy Josh)
For once, I agree with you Liam.

Josh:
Fine then.

Josh walks off towards the crater avoiding obstacles within his path

Scott and Liam shortly follow

Liam:
Wait up! If I didn’t know any better
it seems like you have got a keen
interest with big, dark holes…

Scott:
He was in Juvenile for too long and-

Josh: INTERRUPTING
(bluntly)
                Hahahahahahahahahahahaha no.

Liam:
(confused)
                I don’t understand..

Josh:
Good, you wouldn’t want to.
(sternly looks at Scott)

Josh approaches the crater where he stares down into it

Josh:
(whispers to himself)
                what is that..

Scott:
Get away from the edge,don’t
want you falling in do we?

Liam:(CONT’D
Yeah.

Scott and Liam approach Josh to see what he is staring at

Liam:
Is that a-

Scott:
Meteor. Yes. Has to be.
But, it can’t be!

Josh:
(smugly)
                obviously is.

Josh climbs carefully down into the crater

Scott:
Josh! What the fuck are
you doing?! You’ll get
yourself killed!

Josh:
I’ve done stuff like this
before, I’ll be fineeeeeeeeee

A spark comes of the meteor and connects with Josh which sends him to the ground

Scott:
What the..

Liam:
Josh are you alright?!
‘cos you don’t look it

Josh:
And I’m fine, I just feel
er… weird?

Scott:
It’s about time you came
out the closet.

Josh:
Not like that. I mean I
feel like, hot and numb
almost like I’ve got pins
and needles in my arm

Liam offers his arm out to help Josh out the crater

Josh connects his hand onto Liam’s arm which Liam screams in agony and shrugs Josh off him


Liam:
Josh! What the fuck man,
that hurt!

Josh:
What hurt?

Liam:
You know.

Josh:
I honestly don’t

Liam:
You squeezed my arm!

Josh:
No I didn’t! I had hardly
any grasp on it.

Liam:
well whatever you did it
really fucking hurt.

Scott climbs down into the crater to get a closer look at the meteor

Josh:
(Angrily)
Oh yeah, just climb closer
to the meteor, don’t give a
flying fuck about me.

Liam:
I see what you did there 

Scott:
Shh. From what it seems something
has connected into you, like, an
electric shock or something.

Josh:
Electric? From a meteor?
Next joke.

Scott:
(bragging)
I did GCSE science, I’m
being serious

Liam:
Thought you failed that?

Scott:
(Sternly)
I did, but that’s not the
point.
Liam climbs down into the crater alongside Scott

Liam:
So what actually is it?

Scott:
I’m not sure what it is
but whatever it is, has
totally messed up Josh.

Scott:
Josh… Josh…. JOSH

Josh:                                                                                            
Yeah, sorry, I’m still
here just slowly dieing.

Liam:
But you aren’t.

Josh:
Shutup.

Liam is gazing at the meteor which the other two characters notice

Josh:
(Directed at Liam)
What the fuck are you looking at

Scott:
Who? Me?

Josh:
(Pointing at Liam)
No. Him!

Liam:
(Unaware of what’s happening)
Err. What. Sorry wasn’t listening

Josh:
What were you staring at?

Liam:
(Almost certain)
The Meteor, it’s glowing

Scott:
No it isn’t...

An explosion goes off which Scott and Josh turn around to see where it came from

Scott:
(In fear)
What the fuck was that?!
Josh:
(Bluntly)
Like I’d know

Scott and Josh turn back around to talk to Liam

Scott:
Liam, Do you know wha-

A slight pause

Liam:
What?

Scott: (CONT’D)
Liam?..

Liam:
Yeah?

Liam cannot be seen to the characters but Liam can see them

Josh:
Where the fuck is he? I can
hear him talking about stuff but
he’s like not there

Scott:
(Bluntly to Josh)
No shit. I can hear you but
you’re like not there

Josh:
(Interupts)
I must be trippin’ balls man

Liam:
Are you two okay?

Scott:
(Stressing)
Are we okay? You’re the one
fucking hiding

Liam:
(Unaware)
How am I hiding? I’m stood
right in front of you

Josh:
But we can’t see ya..

Scott:
Did you touch the meteor?


Liam:
I don’t think so, not that
I know of

Josh:
(Making it clear to Scott)
Of course he has! He’s fucking
invisible for fuck sake

Liam:
(In shock)
Me? Invisible? Awesome.

Scott:
He can’t be! You haven’t been
affected like he has!

Characters focus on Josh’s arm

A electic ripple goes along Josh’s arm

Josh:
(Cheekily and cockily)
Are you sure mate?

Scott:
(Starts to panic)
IT CANT BE! SUPERPOWERS ARE
NON-EXISTANT AND DON’T EXIST
IT’S JUST FOR COMICS AND STUFF

Liam:
(Mockingly)
Ooooo someone learned a new
word, Mr Fancyyyyyyy

Scott:
Shutup! You can’t just trot
along over to the meteor and
touch it like this-

Scott touches the meteor

                                                           CUT TO
INT. CITY MAIN STREET
Where a car is hurling towards Liam where Josh fires an electric bolt at to prevent it from hitting Liam

                                                           CUT TO

EXT. CITY
Returns to where they were prior to this flashback-like scene

Josh:
Scott, Scott, are you okay Scott?
Wouldn’t want our little baby all
hurt *graps his cheek mockingly*
Scott shoves Josh off him

Scott:
Wow…

Liam:
What?

Scott:
I think I just had a flashback
Or something

Josh:
Oh yeah? Of what?

Scott:
(struggling to remember)
There was a car. It was flying towards
Liam and you shot it back with a bolt
or something

Liam:
But that hasn’t happened so how is it a
flashback?

Scott:
(Dazed)
I don’t know, it just, just
happened alight?

Josh:
Whatever you’re on. I need some
of that shit.

Another explosion goes off in which the camera has an over-the-shoulder of Liam which a car is heading towards him

Josh quickly steps in and without thinking shoots the car back with an electric bolt

The characters fall to the ground where they try to make sense of what Scott said and what happened

Liam:
(Dazed)
What. Just. Happened.

Josh:
What you said-

Liam and Josh:
(synchronously)
Happened.



Scott:
I know, I knew something happened
to me when I touched the meteor!

Josh:
So let’s get this straight. I can
somehow shoot electric bolts,
Liam can turn invisible and you can
see into the future?!

Scott:
(Unsure)
It seems that way I guess

Josh:
(Slyly)
Do you realize what we can do?!
We can be whatever we want to be!
We’re fucking superheroes!

Liam:
(Extremely Happy)
This is going to be sweeeeeeeeeeeet

Scott:
We have powers now I guess. You know
what they say, with great power comes
great responsibility

Josh:
(Quickly catches on)
You robbed that off Spiderman

Scott:
It’s relevant though

Josh:
I couldn’t give a flying fuck if it’s
relevant, we’ve got a 3 different powers
and we’re sat here in a ditch wondering
why we’ve got them. Let’s get out there
and fuck shit up

Liam:
Amen.

Scott:
We’re (reluctant to say) ‘superheroes’ now.
We’re not criminals.

Liam:
Didn’t stop us before.

               

Scott:
That was different, we had nothing
to do with our lifes: no aspirations,
hopes etc we were washouts with no
purpose but now..

Liam:
(Confused)
                “now” what?

Scott:
Now. We sort this mess out and find out
what’s really going on.


Script Draft 4

EPISODE 1


FADE IN:

SCREEN TITLES: “LIABILITIES”


EXT. HILL IN THE WILDERNERSS – NIGHT

The deserted city in the background, barren landscape showing no-one in sight other than the 3 main characters.
SCOTT (a tall thin boy in his late teens clearly shown by his jumper) is gazing into the distance.  LIAM (overweight, short boy in his mid-teens) and JOSH (a slim individual with large fringe) are stood on a hill overlooking an empty city where no-one is in sight, cars have crashed and there is a big crater in the centre.


                     Scott:
(Gazing into the distance)
Where is everyone?
Like no-one’s there and cars
are overturned and stuff


Liam walks over

Liam:
What are you suggesting Scott?

Josh a slim individual with large fringe buts in

Josh:
He’s obviously suggesting that
everyone has given up with this
dead-end city and decided to
leg it to the nearest city
where dreams can still be made.

Scott:
(Sighs)
No Josh. What I meant to say
is it looks like something has
hit the city and everyone has
fled or worse..

Liam:
What do you mean worse?

Scott:
Like y’know dead and stuff

Josh:
(disbelief)
Just listen to yourselves;
they’re probably fitting new
roads or something you retards


Scott:
That deep? They’re not making
a highway to hell you utter moron.


Liam laughs

Josh:
Okay smartass, so what’s happened?

Liam:
Just stop fighting. We need to go
down there and
(stuttering) investigate

Josh:
Investigate?

Liam:
yeah.

Josh:
So? What are we waiting
around here for? C’mon.

Grabs Liam by the arm as they walk towards the empty city

`                                    Dissolve to:



EXT. URBAN CITY – NIGHT

On the outskirts of an urbanised city where cars have been overturned and car alarms are going off. The air is heavy with mist

Scott:
Well, this doesn’t look
very ‘fun’

Josh:
C’mon lets go closer

Scott:
(dramatically)
And here he goes again,
always taking command to
drag us to an early death

Josh:
Wow. You realllllyyyyyyyy
are a pussy. Liam you game?
Liam:
Game? What? Sorry I wasn’t
listening

Josh:
(Aggressively)
Well I’m going with or without
you.

Liam:
(Stuttering)
but, but, but it looks dangerous
like we could get hurt or somethin’

Scott:
(aimed to annoy Josh)
For once, I agree with you Liam.

Josh:
Fine then.

Josh walks off towards the crater avoiding obstacles within his path

Scott and Liam shortly follow

Liam:
Wait up! If I didn’t know any better
it seems like you have got a keen
interest with big, dark holes…

Scott:
He was in Juvenile for too long and-

Josh: INTERRUPTING
(bluntly)
                Hahahahahahahahahahahaha no.

Liam:
(confused)
                I don’t understand..

Josh:
Good, you wouldn’t want to.
(sternly looks at Scott)

Josh approaches the crater where he stares down into it

Josh:
(whispers to himself)
                what is that..

Scott:
Get away from the edge,don’t
want you falling in do we?

Liam:(CONT’D
Yeah.

Scott and Liam approach Josh to see what he is staring at

Liam:
Is that a-

Scott:
Meteor. Yes. Has to be.
But, it can’t be!

Josh:
(smugly)
                obviously is.

Josh climbs carefully down into the crater

Scott:
Josh! What the f*** are
you doing?! You’ll get
yourself killed!

Josh:
I’ve done stuff like this
before, I’ll be fineeeeeeeeee

A spark comes of the meteor and connects with Josh which sends him to the ground

Scott:
What the..

Liam:
Josh are you alright?!
‘cos you don’t look it

Josh:
And I’m fine, I just feel
er… weird?

Scott:
It’s about time you came
out the closet.

Josh:
Not like that. I mean I
feel like, hot and numb
almost like I’ve got pins
and needles in my arm

Liam offers his arm out to help Josh out the crater

Josh connects his hand onto Liam’s arm which Liam screams in agony and shrugs Josh off him


Liam:
Josh! What the fuck man,
that hurt!

Josh:
What hurt?

Liam:
You know.

Josh:
I honestly don’t

Liam:
You squeezed my arm!

Josh:
No I didn’t! I had hardly
any grasp on it.

Liam:
well whatever you did it
really fucking hurt.

Scott climbs down into the crater to get a closer look at the meteor

Josh:
(Angrily)
Oh yeah, just climb closer
to the meteor, don’t give a
flying fuck about me.

Liam:
I see what you did there 

Scott:
Shh. From what it seems something
has connected into you, like, an
electric shock or something.

Josh:
Electric? From a meteor?
Next joke.

Scott:
(bragging)
I did GCSE science, I’m
being serious

Liam:
Thought you failed that?

Scott:
(Sternly)
I did, but that’s not the
point.
Liam climbs down into the crater alongside Scott

Liam:
So what actually is it?

Scott:
I’m not sure what it is
but whatever it is has
totally messed up Josh.

Scott:
Josh… Josh…. JOSH

Josh:                                                                                            
Yeah, sorry, I’m still
here just slowly dieing.

Liam:
But you aren’t.

Josh:
Shutup.

Liam is gazing at the meteor which the other two characters notice

Josh:
(Directed at Liam)
What the fuck are you looking at

Scott:
Who? Me?

Josh:
(Pointing at Liam)
No. Him!

Liam:
(Unaware of what’s happening)
Err. What. Sorry wasn’t listening

Josh:
What were you staring at?

Liam:
(Almost certain)
The Meteor, it’s glowing

Scott:
No it isn’t...

An explosion goes off which Scott and Josh turn around to see where it came from

Scott:
(In fear)
What the fuck was that?!
Josh:
(Bluntly)
Like I’d know

Scott and Josh turn back around to talk to Liam

Scott:
Liam, Do you know wha-

A slight pause

Liam:
What?

Scott: (CONT’D)
Liam?..

Liam:
Yeah?

Liam cannot be seen to the characters but Liam can see them

Josh:
Where the fuck is he? I can
hear him talking and stuff but
he’s like not there

Scott:
(Bluntly to Josh)
No shit. I can hear you but
you’re like not there

Josh:
(Interupts)
I must be trippin’ balls man

Liam:
Are you two okay?

Scott:
(Stressing)
Are we okay? You’re the one
fucking hiding

Liam:
(Unaware)
How am I hiding? I’m stood
right in front of you

Josh:
But we can’t see ya..

Scott:
Did you touch the meteor?


Liam:
I don’t think so, not that
I know of

Josh:
(Making it clear to Scott)
Of course he has! He’s fucking
invisible for fuck sake

Liam:
(In shock)
Me? Invisible? Awesome.

Scott:
He can’t be! You haven’t been
affected like he has!

Characters focus on Josh’s arm

A electic ripple goes along Josh’s arm

Josh:
(Cheekily and cockily)
Are you sure mate?

Scott:
(Starts to panic)
IT CANT BE! SUPERPOWERS ARE
NON-EXISTANT AND DON’T EXIST
IS JUST FOR COMICS AND STUFF

Liam:
(Mockingly)
Ooooo someone learned a new
word, Mr Fancyyyyyyy

Scott:
Shutup! You can’t just trot
along over to the meteor and
touch it like this-

Scott touches the meteor

                                                           CUT TO
INT. CITY MAIN STREET
Where a car is hurling towards Liam where Josh fires an electric bolt at to prevent it from hitting Liam

                                                           CUT TO

EXT. CITY
Returns to where they were prior to this flashback-like scene

Josh:
Scott, Scott, are you okay Scott?
Wouldn’t want our little baby all
hurt *graps his cheek mockingly*
Scott shoves Josh off him

Scott:
Wow…

Liam:
What?

Scott:
I think I just had a flashback
Or something

Josh:
Oh yeah? Of what?

Scott:
(struggling to remember)
There was a car. It was flying towards
Liam and you shot it back with a bolt
or something

Liam:
But that hasn’t happened so how is it a
flashback?

Scott:
(Dazed)
I don’t know, it just, just
happened alight?

Josh:
Whatever you’re on. I need some
of that shit.

Another explosion goes off in which the camera has an over-the-shoulder of Liam which a car is heading towards him

Josh quickly steps in and without thinking shoots the car back with an electric bolt

The characters fall to the ground where they try to make sense of what Scott said and what happened

Liam:
(Dazed)
What. Just. Happened.

Josh:
What you said-

Liam and Josh:
(synchronously)
Happened.



Scott:
I know, I knew something happened
to me when I touched that meteor!

Josh:
So let’s get this straight. I can
somehow shoot electric bolts,
Liam can turn invisible and you can
see into the future?!

Scott:
(Unsure)
It seems that way I guess

Josh:
(Slyly)
Do you realize what we can do?!
We can be whatever we want to be!
We’re fucking superheroes!

Liam:
(Extremely Happy)
This is going to be sweeeeeeeeeeeet

Scott:
We have powers now I guess. You know
what they say, with great power comes
great responsibility

Josh:
(Quickly catches on)
You robbed that off Spiderman

Scott:
It’s relevant though

Josh:
I couldn’t give a flying fuck if it’s
relevant, we’ve got a 3 different powers
and we’re sat here in a ditch wondering
why we’ve got them. Let’s get out there
and fuck shit up

Liam:
Amen.

Scott:
We’re (reluctant to say) ‘superheroes’ now.
We’re not criminals.

Liam:
Didn’t stop us before.

               

Scott:
That was different, we had nothing
to do with our lifes: no aspirations,
hopes etc we we’re washouts with no
purpose but now..

Liam:
(Confused)
                “now” what?

Scott:
Now. We sort this mess out and find out
what’s really going on.


Fade out